Alone
07.27.07 (8:36 am) [edit]![]() | |
Alone
the soul alone knelt
true knowledge of self humbling
nothing to defend
its darkness exposed
stripped away its pretensions
inner light focused
seeking loves healing
calling out for some surcease
on its face falling
swallowed in darkness
its own self hell creating
clawing with self hate
memories painful
endless cycle repeating
holy name calling
mercy came swiftly
its joyful shout resounding
embracing the soul
the light surrounding
inner healing beginning
now nothing to loose
weight dropping with ease
defensive stances let go
flying into light
painful love stripping
burning scouring away
the soul at last free
one with the true light
actually never left at all
home where it belongs
grace life giving free
sin self created ones hell
life or death ones choice
yet loves still pursues
love never failing seeking
that which was once lost
posted by: iceprincessmelt (reply)
post date: 07.27.07 (5:55 am)
a sad poem... but i like it... despite its sadness... u seem to have a positive view about love... after all the heartbreak... go gurl!
posted by: mitchdolittle (reply)
post date: 07.27.07 (6:01 am)
Thank you, sometimes that is over looked, some of my friends think I too dark.
peace
Mark
posted by: auntconi (reply)
post date: 07.27.07 (6:38 am)
Reply to: mitchdolittle
~ too dark? ~ more like 'with much love' and you have so much as evidenced by your use of words.
peace
C
posted by: mitchdolittle (reply)
post date: 07.27.07 (10:50 am)
Thank you auntconi.
peace
Mark
