Flawless
07.22.07 (12:01 pm) [edit] |  |
 |  |
Hair flowing loosely down
Flawless skin daring touch
I walked away afraid
posted by: surrogate (reply)
post date: 07.22.07 (9:20 am)
I don't get Haiku
Five then seven sylables
then five again: why?
posted by: mitchdolittle (reply)
post date: 07.22.07 (10:01 am)
I think it has to have 17 syables, I one one too many. I have to work on it some more. The rules, the why, I have no idea.
I am trying to get into smaller poems, and haike seems a way to help me. A different experience, writing smaller stuff.
peace
mark