Undone
07.21.07 (7:49 pm) [edit] |  |
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Undone
One man one women,
Just another day for both,
Unknown to each other,
Just another lonely day,
Then one look,
A smile,
Both became undone.
posted by: LadyG (reply)
post date: 07.22.07 (2:12 am)
Nice, I have never been poetic like you mitch, I like it.
posted by: mitchdolittle (reply)
post date: 07.22.07 (5:11 am)
Thank you Lady G, I am glad you like my short pieces, something new I am working on.
peace
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