For all to see

06.23.07 (8:17 am)   [edit]

 

 

We are born without a stitch,
Naked for all to see,
Needing care and constant watching
Decreasing as the years march by one by one.

We grow and learn,
Independence grows as we mature,
Though not all survive to live a long life.
Some cut short on the day of birth,
Others drop as time flows forward,
Some die because of simple stupidity
Thinking themselves immortal doing foolish things;
So violence plays a major role in mortality,
Yes and disease striking suddenly for some,
For others it creeps slowly draining life away.

We reach our prime and go out into the world,
Young adulthood a time of growth and excitement,
Dating, parties, traveling, school.
Then marriage,
Settling down
A time of sacrifice and joy for many,
For some running from their responsibility
Leading to shattered lives and perhaps despair.

So the years begin to fly by.
Years seem like months,
Months like weeks,
Weeks like days,
Days, well they seem like smoke,
At the end,
Which is its nature,
Gone, fading into the air,
Much forgotten swallowed by oblivion.

Then we become old,
Some succumb sooner than others,
Yet it arrives,
We become dependent,
Needing care and constant watching,
Naked for some to see,
Increasing care as the years go by
Until we end,
Silence takes us,
The dark door closes,
Hiding the light that many believe awaits us,
Faith is my light on this joyful yet often dark journey,
Which I love.



posted by: LadyG (reply)
post date: 06.23.07 (3:37 pm)

Very nice Mitch and thought provocking, how is your friend that you were helping?



posted by: mitchdolittle (reply)
post date: 06.23.07 (4:54 pm)

If you are talking about Aldo, he is still struggling, William has plateaued, but he will never get to where he was before.

peace
Mark



posted by: PastorDave (reply)
post date: 06.24.07 (1:33 pm)

You make it sound so tedious, and brief. I'm not disagreeing. I read the scriptures, and I know that my life is on high speed right now. And it is so very good to know I have faith as my companion, and when this life is over faith will still be there.

Thanks, Mitch. I don't comment a lot on your stuff, but I do read from time to time. Keep it up. You're a fine writer.



posted by: mitchdolittle (reply)
post date: 06.24.07 (4:51 pm)

Poetry deals with life, but there is always more.
Thanks for you kind comment.

Peace
Mark

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